Write ten sentences about any subject—your favorite color, for instance. Keeping
your subject matter simple in these sentence writing exercises will make it easier to
find your sentence structures later. After you have written your sentences, go back
and underline your subjects once and your verbs twice. Use your own paper, and
keep all of your sentence writing results in a folder. When you have completed your editing post your paragraph in the comments section of this post and also as a post on your personal Blog.
My pet
ReplyDelete1 My pet name is princess. 2 She is a pitbull dog. 3 Her hair is brown and black. 4 she has brown eyes. 5 When i am feeling lonely i talk to her. 6 I think my dog understands me. 7 Better than people do.
8 Princess loves to tear up stuff like slippers and balls etc. 9 When i reach home from school at night she runs and jumpes on me. 10 Princess is a good dog.
I will indicate places that I want you to review. Find the errors and re-post :-)
DeleteMy pet "________"
1 My "pet" name is "princess". 2 She is a pitbull dog. 3 Her hair is brown and black. 4 "she" has brown eyes. 5 When "i"am feeling lonely "i" talk to her. 6 I think my dog understands me". 7 "Better than people do.
8 Princess loves to tear up stuff" "like slippers and balls etc. 9 When "i "reach home from school at night" "she runs and jumpes on me. 10 Princess is a good dog""
...LUCKY...
ReplyDelete1.)My dog's name is lucky. 2.) He is a German-Shepard. 3.) He was given to me as a gift when i was 6 years old. 4.) He loves to bark and attack people who try to harm me. 5.) We can communicate with each other cause i understand him and he understands me. 6.)He is very big. 7.) He is very old thou. 8.) He has about 24 dogs from his generation living. 9.) I would like to have him until i die. 10.) Lucky is the best dog there is.
..LUCKY...
DeleteI will indicate places that I want you to review. Find the errors and re-post :-)
1.)My dog's name is lucky. 2.) He is a German-Shepard. 3.) He was given to me as a gift when "i" was 6 years old. 4.) He loves to bark and attack people who try to harm me. 5.) We can communicate with each other "cause" "i" understand him and he understands me. 6.)He is very big. 7.) He is very old "thou". 8.) He has about 24 dogs from his generation living. 9.) I would like to have him until "i" die. 10.) Lucky is the best dog there is""
Very nice! Not many errors. I see improvement. Just remember to recheck your work before you post.